I moderate a crit group, Unicorn Bell with three talented writers, Charity, Marcy, and Tara.
Yesterday I analyzed and posted a submission.
Questions:
Did I help? Is my crittering right on or a load of used hay?
Is the revision appropriate or stepping over the line?
We appreciate comments here and at Unicorn Bell.
I am new to Unicorn Bell website. Liking it though.
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Well, I completely agree with how you re-wrote the scene so that kinda colors my opinion...
ReplyDeletebut I think you can only lead the horse to water. You've got to let the writer decide what to do.
I've read most of the critiques you've given and I agree with your comments.
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