Thursday, November 3, 2011

Crit My Crit

I moderate a crit group, Unicorn Bell with three talented writers, Charity, Marcy, and Tara.  

Yesterday I analyzed and posted a submission.


Did I help? Is my crittering right on or a load of used hay? Is the revision appropriate or stepping over the line?

We appreciate comments here and at Unicorn Bell.


  1. I am new to Unicorn Bell website. Liking it though.

    Just wanted you to know I gave you an award on my blog today! :)

  2. Well, I completely agree with how you re-wrote the scene so that kinda colors my opinion...

    but I think you can only lead the horse to water. You've got to let the writer decide what to do.

  3. I've read most of the critiques you've given and I agree with your comments.


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