Monday, March 11, 2013

The Quick and Dirty Tips to Improve Your Writing


There is a lot of advice in the blogosphere for us writers. Blogs, books, webinars, virtual classrooms. It boils down to this:


Don’t look at the monitor

I realize this is a strange bit of advice but hear me out. While the creative juices are flowing during the first draft, it is natural to look at the monitor. Don’t. While typing, look at a blank piece of paper, the floor, the wall. Glance at the monitor and keyboard to make sure you aren't doing this number: dp,yjomh ;olr but otherwise, keep your brain moving. 

Don’t let the monitor play Squirrel! with your mind.

Research examples of established writing.

When I begin a new book, my mind is in two places. First, I am into the story. Second, I question myself. What interested me in this book? What is it about the first line/page/paragraph that drew me in? I analyze these sections.

Scenes that pop aren't just a source of good reading. They are also examples of good writing. I blow them up like a digital engine to see the moving parts. A play-by-play scrutiny from my writer’s eye, grammatically and emotionally. Why did the MC’s actions affect me and when? At what point did my mind’s eye lock into this scene and why?

Explore your feelings

Humans and writers (non-humans?) have depths that remain hidden. A private place that doesn’t come out to play much. If you want your writing to be real, bring those hidden places out. Give them a venue, your manuscript, your scene-stealers.

Distractions

You've heard this advice many times: ‘Pick a time of day to write when distractions are few’. Blah, blah blah. This borders on fantasy land. 

Interruptions from your job and loved ones who insist on bugging you, (seriously, it’s a wonder I haven’t put a shock collar on the hubby) are a fact. It happens. Deal with it (shock collars on sale at Amazon?). 

But you do have control over the internet.

When you write, WRITE. Do not let the siren’s call of the internet pull you away.

Check no facts, spellings, alternate emotions. No email pings. No images. No videos. Write.

Give it up for a few days

Ben Franklin said 
Guests like fish begin to stink after a few days. 
So does our writing. Give that manuscript a rest. Let that beloved prose snooze for a few days. I guarantee the bad parts will rise to the surface.

Do you have any priceless writing tips?

Monday, February 25, 2013

Cover Reveal for Ninja Captain...

...and Blogger Extraordinaire, Alex Cavanaugh


A storm gathers across the galaxy…


Title: CASSASTORM

Author: Alex J. Cavanaugh

Publisher: Dancing Lemur Press
Genre: Science Fiction - Space Opera/Adventure
Release Date: September 17, 2013
Print ISBN: 9781939844002
E-book ISBN: 9781939844019


Byron thought he’d put the days of battle behind him. Commanding the Cassan base on Tgren, his only struggles are occasional rogue pirate raids and endless government bureaucracies. As a galaxy-wide war encroaches upon the desert planet, Byron’s ideal life is threatened and he’s caught between the Tgrens and the Cassans.

After enemy ships attack the desert planet, Byron discovers another battle within his own family. The declaration of war between all ten races triggers nightmares in his son, shaking Bassan to the core and threatening to destroy the boy’s mind.
Meanwhile the ancient alien ship is transmitting a code that might signal the end of all life in the galaxy. And the mysterious probe that almost destroyed Tgren twenty years ago could be on its way back. As his world begins to crumble, Byron suspects a connection. The storm is about to break, and Byron is caught in the middle…


Sunday, February 24, 2013

Zombies Have Claimed Me


I am late to this zombie loving party. Blame it on the game Plants vs Zombies and Warm Bodies. Both eased me into their lair.

The Walking Dead. Michael and Marcy told me to watch it and long ago, I did see the pilot. What turned me off at the time was the stereotypical portrayal of a redneck racist who spouted crap. I reckon there is a need for drama/conflict but my lip curled after that first scene with Merle. Just don’t care for the stuff.

The Dead marathon on AMC let me watch several episodes for a bit more perspective. Not that everything was sugar cookies with sprinkles though. I nearly deleted the whole thing on my DVR several times. But now Daryl is coming along nicely. Glenn is very cool. Lori is still an idiot but whatever; as long as Carl doesn't get his brains ate, I will remain.

I haven’t seen all the past shows and the new episodes tell me that not everyone has survived. Interesting. I wonder how Dale croaked, er, tasted.

I might be a little slow. But you can bet, tonight, The Walking Dead will have my complete attention.

Monday, February 18, 2013

Here's Your Sign (that you're a Writer)


You know you’re a writer when:


-The hubby smashes his finger with a ten-pound hammer and all you can think about on the trip to the ER is how to put the screaming in a scene

-Poor grammar in famous books drives you nuts

-Reading for pleasure morphs into reading for stylistic ideas

-You talk to the voices in your head
-And they answer

-Interruptions from spouse/kids/phone/fire in the kitchen tee you off

-You've been writing since 5 am and are shocked when you realize the sun is up and it is lunchtime

-When the voices wake you in the middle of the night, the scrawl you made on the phone book by the bed needs translated

-Scribbling a chapter ending without taking your eyes off the road while driving actually makes sense.

-Human behavior in a mall is prime fodder for your wip
-People are suspicious when you stare at them in a mall

-Meals are a distraction and entirely voluntary

-Caffeine is your boon companion

-Chocolate is mandatory to complete tough scenes

-The family grows to expect non-verbal responses when you are writing

-Pen and writing material are close by at all times
-Post-its, paper napkins, used envelopes, and magazine covers are acceptable writing material


Being a writer gives you one of Life’s highest highs and lowest lows.

 

But you keep on truckin’ 

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