tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8542683203952246031.post7459686422624278344..comments2023-11-12T09:33:59.402-06:00Comments on Spirit Called: WishesHuntresshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08155372788872245758noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8542683203952246031.post-63931119584748990912011-12-02T18:10:32.700-06:002011-12-02T18:10:32.700-06:00Good for you--that's a hefty bunch of words! C...Good for you--that's a hefty bunch of words! Congrats and best wishes to get them how you want. I think your opening is intriguing; the character catches the attention of the reader as well as the MC. :)Carol Riggshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14092209912983783974noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8542683203952246031.post-89774708202663766002011-12-01T04:55:01.597-06:002011-12-01T04:55:01.597-06:00Congrats on the word count and the hook is intrigu...Congrats on the word count and the hook is intriguing too!Christy Farmerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03891965607401791893noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8542683203952246031.post-34802037078997189162011-11-30T18:02:19.711-06:002011-11-30T18:02:19.711-06:00i wrote a comment and forgot to publish it...
an...i wrote a comment and forgot to publish it...<br /><br />anyway, great job! and love the improved hook paragraph =)Tara Tylerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07587802105993889515noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8542683203952246031.post-11345519082632718632011-11-30T08:20:34.746-06:002011-11-30T08:20:34.746-06:00Yayyy! Brilliant word count! I love the hooker, um...Yayyy! Brilliant word count! I love the hooker, ummmm, hooky hook. I like how it is similar to HIM in a way, yes? It catches my attention and draws me in.<br /><br /><3Mia Haysonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01041441666482084762noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8542683203952246031.post-40583176281270327632011-11-29T16:07:41.860-06:002011-11-29T16:07:41.860-06:00Oh wow...so now I hae to know why people part for ...Oh wow...so now I hae to know why people part for him like the Red Sea. Interesting.Angela Brownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03324366495151363782noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8542683203952246031.post-22007526615477906682011-11-29T13:39:13.751-06:002011-11-29T13:39:13.751-06:00@Marcy
oh, thankx. You don't know how much tha...@Marcy<br />oh, thankx. You don't know how much that means to me.<br /><br />@Charity<br />yes. yes. yesyesyesyesyesyes<br /><br />@Alex<br />I hope this is the 'one'. *G*<br /><br />@Michael, Expert Critic (I hear Mission Impossible music when I see your name. don't know why)<br />If Wishes were horses beggars would ride.Huntresshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08155372788872245758noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8542683203952246031.post-54345257305087462902011-11-29T12:55:35.089-06:002011-11-29T12:55:35.089-06:00If wishes were fishes the sea would be full.If wishes were fishes the sea would be full.Michael Offutt, Phantom Readerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10557969104886174930noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8542683203952246031.post-84456588102821167882011-11-29T12:46:16.867-06:002011-11-29T12:46:16.867-06:00Good stuff on the word count! Now you have me curi...Good stuff on the word count! Now you have me curious with that beginning...Alex J. Cavanaughhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09770065693345181702noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8542683203952246031.post-54461372844516954922011-11-29T11:32:03.163-06:002011-11-29T11:32:03.163-06:00*giggles and rubs her hands together* That's 2...*giggles and rubs her hands together* That's 20K more than what I've read. *big grin*<br /><br />Thanks for playing with us! Some of us are going to continue the chain until we finish our novels. Let me know if you want to stay on the list.Charity Bradfordhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01960821077619680661noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8542683203952246031.post-24857166481057735452011-11-29T11:26:09.436-06:002011-11-29T11:26:09.436-06:00well, I can't comment, since I've already ...well, I can't comment, since I've already read the first bit and know things get very interesting. Congrats on your word count! How soon til completion? and if you need a cp for it you know who to call :)mshatchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06308916014310536449noreply@blogger.com