tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8542683203952246031.post2875542161491843251..comments2023-11-12T09:33:59.402-06:00Comments on Spirit Called: Unicorn Bell, Loglines, and Three-Line Pitches.Huntresshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08155372788872245758noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8542683203952246031.post-21108142521610104592011-07-08T16:45:06.955-05:002011-07-08T16:45:06.955-05:00As long as it grabs me, I don't care how it...As long as it grabs me, I don't care how it's done. Some authors write powerful dialogue. It would be a shame for an editor to blow the work before they actually read it.Mary@GigglesandGunshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07350818228268801008noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8542683203952246031.post-18705280437799987172011-07-08T13:16:08.406-05:002011-07-08T13:16:08.406-05:00I'd have to go back to a couple of my favorite...I'd have to go back to a couple of my favorite books and look. I started my first book with a line of action, the second one starts with internal dialogue.Alex J. Cavanaughhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09770065693345181702noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8542683203952246031.post-534226092944114852011-07-08T08:33:51.703-05:002011-07-08T08:33:51.703-05:00Yeah, easier said than done. LOL.Yeah, easier said than done. LOL.E. Arroyohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06634213563563094173noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8542683203952246031.post-28544591763233230512011-07-08T08:06:59.564-05:002011-07-08T08:06:59.564-05:00The Dreaded Logline (DL): it's about telling t...The Dreaded Logline (DL): it's about telling the whole shebang in one sentence with enough hook to grab and storyline to intrigue w/o giving too much away.<br /><br />Reeeeeeeeeeeeeeeally easy, huh.Huntresshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08155372788872245758noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8542683203952246031.post-41944180756653889172011-07-08T07:49:08.133-05:002011-07-08T07:49:08.133-05:00The first line is all about voice, and authority, ...The first line is all about voice, and authority, IMHO.<br /><br />And I have decent query, and a two sentence pitch. But I still need to come up with that in between one.Matthew MacNishhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03264738483763244969noreply@blogger.com