Next week on Unicorn Bell -- the critique site of CharityBradford, Marcy, and I -- a two-headed Giveaway and much angst.
And the Dreaded Logline/Three-Line Pitch
Check in on Monday for the details. For now, go to UB for the tools to perfect that first line.
What is it that grabs your attention as you read the first page of a new book? What turns you off in that first line? Some agents hate dialogue as the first line, others like it.
Really, it is what snares your eye. Use what trips your trigger and make that first line pop.