aww, can't i have just one more?hee heehappy d day =)
A colorful verb, or a well placed metaphor can make up for several lines of description. Sometimes.
"Eye-trash" -- oh, how I love that term!
OK. (Sigh). Ooookaaaay. I do like adjectives - adverbs I can live without, but adjectives...Oh I can have three? Yippeee! I'm leaping about with joy now (that's a long way around to say I'm happy now)
sound advice. I do love my adjectives and adverbs though. Very muchly.......dhole
Good advice. But I have to admit, I LOVE me a lush read from time to time. When it's done well, not every sentence, but for special moments in the MS, it can take a novel to a whole new level of literary. ;)
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